My film script idea

INT. Wombwell

James is walking towards the train station, he appears content as he listens to music on his phone.

INT. WOMBWELL TRAIN STATION

As James walks onto the platform he approaches a young girl, Sally who stands awkwardly waiting for train.

James:

Hey, it's Sally...right?

Sally looks at James nervously, she is obviously shy around him.

SALLY:

Hello...yeah, we're in the same psychology.

JAMES:

Yeah..erm, where you off to?

SALLY:

Just meeting some friends at Frankie and Benny's

James:

Oh cool. Yeah, I'm just going to work.

Sally looks at James, they make eye contact and everything gets awkward. It is obvious that there is some chemistry between the two.

JAMES:

Urban Outfitters...that's where I work.

Sally smiles at him and starts to text on her phone as the conversation goes dead.

CLOSE UP: JAMES MOVES HIS HAND NERVOUSLY AS HE STRUGGLES TO KNOW WHAT TO SAY.

int. james goes into a daydream about their future.

Scenes flash by of what James believes to be a perfect relationship with this girl. It goes through all there time together up to marriage.

INT. WOMBWELL TRAIN STATION

When James comes back down to Earth, Sally is staring at him very confused.

SALLY:

James...James...James, the trains here, are you coming?

JAMES:

Oh...erm, yeah yeah.

James walks in front of Sally as he boards the train. As she looks at him the same daydreams happen.

INT. SALLY GOES INTO A DAYDREAM

Scenes flash by again of her version of an amazing relationship, of dates and romantic dinners. When she comes back around James is stood on the train waiting for her to board.

int. on the train

James and Sally go to sit on the train, they sit together nervously and don't speak as the train sets off.

SALLY:

James

JAMES:

Sally

They talk over each other as they are about to say something.

JAMES:

(Laughs)


Sally smiles at James and internal dialogue starts. She tells herself to stop being nervous and talk to him more.

SALLY:

So, erm...we're almost there.

JAMES:

(Internal dialogue)

Why are you being so quiet?

JAMES:

Yeah, we are. I guess I'll see you in psychology then.

James gets up to get off the train and Sally smiles at him as he walks to the door and gets off.

As the train goes past Wombwell train station toward Sheffield, Sally checks the time on her phone and see's a Facebook message from James Oscar. She opens it up on her phone and it says, "Sally, I could not bring myself to say it in person....Do you want to get coffee sometimes?"

Sally smiles and she replies, "yes."